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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Ok, so I'm back to review again. There is only ONE thing I don't understand about the story. It seems to me that basically, Severus knows that Justine has been assigned to kill him, and he doesn't resist...she's basically his form of suicide. But WHO has assigned Justine to kill him? She talks about her mind "turning back to thoughts of war" so I'm guessing she somehow works for Voldemort?

Either way, ignore what other people have said about your story being bad and not a HG/SS story. Your writing is brilliant! I'm a huge fan of darkfics like this, and to this date, I have only read ONE other HG/SS darkfic that I truly loved. Now there's two :) Please write some more for this site, I'd love to read more!

Very good story, even for one that isn't truly a Snape/Hermione fic. You're a very good writer....I'd love to see how you'd write a true SS/HG!

oooo wow i dont know what to say. please tell me where you learned to write. it was amazing. the story itself was good but the writting was fantastic. i love your use of langue. its very well done. and i almost cried it was so sad. gosh you have a serious talent. don't waist it on petty fanfiction. do something brilliant.

Maybe it is because I am my mother tongue is not English that I don't understand everything of the plot and who is who.
But your style of writing and the words you choose are like magic to my soul.
Your story is like poetry.
Would you please clear things up for me?
Thnx

The girl is a student and 16. This is also not really SS/HG. One word-Yuck.

How sad, it made me feel very heartbroken.
Don't let the people that are saying this isn't a SS/HG story get you down.
He may not literally be with Hermione, but he may as well be.
He's using a girl who looks like Hermione to glean some last pleasure from her memory.
His body may not be with her, but his heart, soul, and mind clearly are.
I don't think that this belongs anywhere BUT the HG/SS section.
All in all, it was very good I thought. It was enticing and well written.
My only criticism is that I was really confused by the character of the girl.
Her motives were vague at best, and you seemed to suggest some things about her that were unclear (such as what she had lost from the war).
But other than that, I liked it very much.

Well, he may be thinking about HG but he's messing around with some 16 year old mental case that's his student. This Snape is disgusting. This should be in the SS/OFC section.

I remember reading this awhile ago and I did enjoy it :) I am a little confused though maybe because it's midnight or maybe because I am a tad slow atm hehe Is Hermione dead? and who kills him?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?