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by craxy

person Jet
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story! Please update soon.
person akitso
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW, WOW WOW WOW. i mean WOW!!! OH MY GOD i have the shivers!!! this was soo good!! i mean, my arms are SHAKING!!! U HAVE TO WRITE MORE, IT WAS SOOO GOOD!!! I JUST CAN\'T BELIEVE IT. IT\'S... WOW~!!!
person jill
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful....Now I can wait to read the next chapter to see what really happened between the two of them. Great Job!. Jill
person chantalamlfoy
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmmm... can\'t wait to read Harry\'s explination for that spell.
person Larimar
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Guh!!! WOW!!! I can\'t wait for Harry to explain! Great chapter. I look forward to the next one!
person Griffinomad
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! What the hell was that? Fascinating story.
person DeepEmerald
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Powerfully erotic. Lovely writing! Your characterizations are full and captivating. You use few words to describe much, a true gift! I\'m very much looking forward to reading more!
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was something. I hope you write more!
person Katie
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Well. That was hot. And confusing, I do hope you\'ll explain though. This is written very well I might add. Please update soon, I know I\'ll be waiting for you to.
person k
schedule March 26, 1920 at 12:00 AM
I am very impressed with your story. You have depth and your work is full of passion. I\'m looking foward to future chapters.