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for Totem

by craxy

person DeepEmerald
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter! Your writing continues to impress with its level of sensuality and feeling. Very much looking forward to the rest!
person PotionsPet
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! PLEASE update SOON! That was SO HOT!!!!!!!!!1
person sethian
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! WOW! I love it. The sex scenes were simply wonderfull I enjoyed it so much!!!!
person PotionsPet
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! and so very hot...PLEASE let me know when you update!
person Larimar
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. Keep up the terrific writing! I really liked the rainstorm scene!
person Sethian
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how I love your story, please next time you update warn me juike ike you did today! I greatly enjoyed reading the third chapter ! Thank you for writing this story, If you hadn\'t I would never have had the chance to read it. ^.^
person Ellen
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yippie! Another FABULOUS chapter--you write such beautiful love scenes! Can\'t wait for chapter 4!
:)
person MistressofDisaster
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Story . I really want to read more of it . please write more soon.
MD
person akume
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Spectacular! Absolutely incredible! I had to read this a second time. Anyway, I can\'t wait for your next chapter. I gotta know what type of ritual Harry performed. So, please update soon.
person Ellen
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Really wow. Its not often a story here leaves me speechless, but wow. Please, please update soon!