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by craxy

person phillie
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A truly excellent story, the smut and the cuteness are well balanced, and there's plot too!! Add good writing skills in the mix and the potion is perfect! I hope you are going on with this, I'll look forward to next chapter!
person Hel Bee
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I am really enjoying this and wait patiently for updates!

One small thing is that you keep spelling Lucius as Lucious I think it might just be the spell checker on your PC autocorrecting it! I am sure some peeps think Lucius ush ush but I'm more a Sev girl myself ;-)

Look forward to the next update

Hel Bee
person aliciamasters
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What an amazing story! I love the depth of feeling here. I truly appreciate stories where the emotional state of the characters is more important than the physical, and you are certainly providing that! The first, and last, love scenes you wrote are some of the most erotic I\'ve ever read. Amazing work! I wish I could find out when you post the next chapter: do you have a livejournal, or an update list? I don\'t want to miss it!
person Sailor Sol (too lazy to sign in)
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is shaping up nicely. Now, I would guess that old Moldywarts couldn\'t feed on Severus because of the bond. Interesting.

Keep up the good work. If you get writer\'s block or need a beta, let me know!
person MistressofDisaster
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god how sad ! Please update soon
person S. Grey
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Please continue? -Gives cookie.-
person nesscafe
schedule July 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SNARRY FUN!!! I love this story! The smut is just incredibly well written! The plot is fascinating antrigtriguing! I can not wait to read another chapter!!! Please update soon!
person Sevfan
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story. Chapter 2 was totally hot! Nice work! Please update soon.
person akume
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my! This is turning out to be one interesting piece. I can\'t wait for your follow-up.
person chantalmalfoy
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Harry better not get blamed for Trelawney\'s murder!!!!!!!
I\'m really liking the Harry/Sev stuff. New chapter soon please.