rate_review Reviews

Wow. This story is amazingly beautiful. I really love it.

"Seems" as in "It seems like/as if..."

"Seams" as in "Fix the seams of these dresses."

You need to put "seems" for every place you use "seams". You also need to get a beta.

Hey, I really got into this story and am interested in reading past chapter 14. Is there any more of this finished elsewhere? Are you going to finish it at all? I'd love to hear from you. You're writing is very good and I got sucked into the story line so now I want to know more.

Thanks,
Kristina

Hey there. I just finished reading what you had posted, and loved it all. I was just wondering if you are still going to update this fic at some point and time, i would love to see what\'s going to happen next/

I started reading this story a long time ago. I am glad you haven\'t given up and have updated. Very nice job.

cdk

Very interesting chapter! I like how the relationship is so challenging between Severus and Harry. Both the dreams and Draco are making this so difficult! I did have a little trouble with Poppy\'s laissez-faire attitude to Harry beating up Severus. If you archive this story, you may want to add in a little worry that Harry is abusive, and a mention that this episode was brought about by a repressed memory. Otherwise, anyone in the medical field would try to stop the abuse, and separate abuser and abused to get an account.

Great work. Thanks for the email letting me know about the update...I haven\'t been checking aff.net!

Excellent. Purely Excellent. You are very good at writing. The opening of the chapter was almost poetic, you seem to have real talent! Please update soon!

wonderful story please write more and faster!

Hey, I`m waiting for a new chapter!!!!!!;)

What a very original and intrecit plot. The sex is wonderful too. Nice writing.

cdk