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for Obsession

by alicat999

person morgana
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
he he more more. very good and I like snape being a bit evil. it is his nature . you have made a plausible snape who is a a true dichotmy of good with an evil side. bravo. please continue this very very very well written story.
person Dryad
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Ali...you\'ve created an incredible environment here! I can\'t wait to see where you take it...its obvious Hermione already feels safe with Severus, even if only subconciously...but i have to say...you REALLY need a beta...email me if you\'d like.
person Talene
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So.....when you gonna write more? I am eagerly awaiting more chappies!
person ann
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good....update please!
person olka-polka
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Continue, please.
person Lyndie578
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Yes, please let us know what an obsessive Snape\'s next move is. Talking with the headmaster, oh my!
person N
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the start of this. Get to it! (ummm. please. really, I\'m not a mean person. please?)
person devotchka
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Very nice beginning. I can\'t wait for his visit to the headmasters. Quick, update.
person morgana
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow wow wow utterly fabulous . bravo bravo. I am stunned and amazed and shocked at how goos this is. if this is only the first chapter I can truely not wait for more. well done
person morgana
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow wow wow utterly fabulous . bravo bravo. I am stunned and amazed and shocked at how good this is. if this is only the first chapter I can truely not wait for more. well done