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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t see why you wouldn\'t continue this...aren\'t you yourself interested in where this might lead?
Please just keep this going. Its so good, and it would be a shame to just let it die.
Please just keep this going. Its so good, and it would be a shame to just let it die.
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very inventive! Snape actually leaves Hogwarts and spurs a wave of philanthropy! HA! And please, please, keep him snarky once you get him back there or she won\'t like him--too much change. Change of environment, OK; change of personality, NO! Snarkiness is so much more sexy! Hermione will think so too!
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really really want lemon. Please update soon.
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
s\'ok. I can\'t believe the scene with snape in the arm chair it was hilarius. I think it was perfect and snape may have been cordial but he also would have thought it great fun to do that to hermione. way to go neville. you have done it again. please please continue.well done.
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
While the story is interesting thus far, I think you really need a Beta. Also, I think the word you\'re looking for is \"Obsession.\"
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So he\'s a little OC? I liked it, actually. Looking forward to the lemon zest in the next chappie, in fact I am brewing a pot of tea now!
Live long and prosper.
Titania
Live long and prosper.
Titania
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story has a lot of promise. I really like the premise. You need a beta to check for spelling (things like your and you\'re, to and too) which make the story look more amateurish than it actually is. But, it is off to a good start and I would really like to see the entire thing.
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the level of ooc for Snape. I don\'t think that you went too far in having him acknowledge Neville\'s talents. Snape values intellience, and he can now acknowledge that although Neville is hopeless in other areas, he excells in Herbology. Can\'t wait for the update!
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July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is great. Please update soon.
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July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes. Please more and more and more. This is a very interesting fic. I like it!
Live long and prosper!
Titania
Live long and prosper!
Titania