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More! MORE!!! Now! Usually I am very picky about sentence structure and grammar, but this story was so interesting that I didn't even notice any flaws. That makes this a fantastic story in my boo; bravo.

It wasn\'t reall the ink, was it! I either love or hate the twins, and in this one I hate them. Hate them for creating any kind of doubt in Severus\' mind. That was quite a plot twist, though it usually is harder for them to get together. Why can\'t it be easier for once? Probably because easy is not that interesting. Thanks for continuing this story. I\'m looking forward to your next chapter--hopefully where Hermione continues to evaluate her feelings for Severus and wonders whether it was the ink or not. ?

Fantastic!!!! Very veery ery very GOOD story. Please can I ask you to update soon? Anyway here I go UPDATE SOON, PLEASE........................ hugs vania

The best story I have ever read.

Your story is fabulous. I just stared reading it today. and please keep writing its so much fun to read. i hope the next chapter is posted soon. i can\'t wait and see what happens. you are a wonderful writer and i\'m looking for more storys by you.

You know I love Fred and George to death, but they tend to be a bit immature. Thanks for getting us this chapter, I\'ve been waiting for it since yesterday.

I can\'t wait for them to really gorkiorking together on some project.

The only thing that pops into my mind after reading the fourth chapter is \"Ooooh, what happens when she goes back to work? When will the next chapter be written?\" This is good stuff and I hope that you will decide to finish it soon .

I really like this story and cant wait for more!! But...

Your punctuation and sentence structure is a bit...off. You seperate paragraphs right in the middle of the sentence. And then you cut your sentences off at the wrong places. And you put cs ins in strange places too. You should fix that.

But other than that, its great and I love it!!

That messy bit is supposed to say \"You put commas in strange places.\" Don\'t know what happened there... :)

I have not forgotten you. I promise! I am not that accustomed to such quick updates and I will certainly check out your other stories! You are doing a wonderful job! I liked Ron ok from the movies and book but, i don\'t much care for him as a character. Never *have* much cared for narrow-minded people. Heh....That is how he seems to me. Though mind....I would make every effort to get to know everyone there if that opprotunity ever came to be. Hey! I can dream. Can\'t I? Isn\'t that what most of us are doing here in one form or another? hehe Ok, ok, ok.....I\'ll get off my soap-box now. *giggle* Great work! I\'ll look for updates daily now.