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for Obsession

by alicat999

person DarkFire
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I must read more of this jewel. Please update soon. The way Severus mind work is enchanting, marvelous, devious, romantic and kinky. Great mixture. ;P
person Ciaran LionHeart
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God!!! I really love your story. If I loved it a bit more it would be a sin. Please update as soon as you can. I'm hooked and I like too much the way you're portraying Snape.
person Leila5
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great work!!! keep it up!! update soon! *hugs*

*~Leila~*
person April
schedule October 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really like the premise of this story. keep up the good work
person Roget
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now you HAVE to start updating this story regularly! I am dying to see how they react when they are finally in each others' presence. Plus, I just love an obsessed Snape. I keep checking back - you do your part (writing) and I'll do mine (reading)!!
person h
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting.
person mariteri
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story is amazing.You are doing an excellent job of writing! I love it. One thing--you might think of having someone read it over, a beta reader if you will. I spotted some type-os here and there. Nothing that would effect the story itself, but you might want to keep an eye out so you can clean it up. Great work and updsoonsoon!
person ancientgirl
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you soooooooo much for updating. But now you left us wanting even more. Please I am begging you on my hands and knees, update quickly.
person Sabrina
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really glad you updated. Keep up the good work.
person robin
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write more I miss this fic