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by alicat999

person Alan\'s Only
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
congrats on the baby and i loved your story!
person Cheryl
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story and I\'m really enjoying it. Hopefully you will be updating soon! Severus isn\'t the only one who is becoming impatient... ;-)
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story so far! I can\'t wait to read more! What was Lucius looking for? I can\'t wait to find out! Please update again and soon! i love this story so far by the way.

Tiffany
person L Con
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have way too many spelling errors!
person strangeone
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an awesome story you\'ve got going here. Once I started reading I couldn\'t stop, well done. Please update soon.
person DawnEB
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, a new plot twist, can\'t wait to see more. Congrats on the baby, but beware! you are in that lull between \'getting into a routine\' and \'mobile\'. I was interupted 3 times whilst trying to read this chapter chasing down a 10 month old who was trying his hardest to escape (including following one of his sisters upstairs)
person Miari
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Firstly, congratulations on your newest youngling:)
Secondly, AARRGGHH!!! EVIL CLIFFIE!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Continue this beautifully written tale soon!
Thank you for delightful read thusfar.
person lovethelab
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on your recent addition! I know what a wonderful time this is for you and wish you and your family a long and health life together.
Thank you for updating. I really have enjoyed this story and I am glad to see you are starting it back up. I wonder what Severus found in Neville\'s mind that caused Neville to blush like that??
person firewall
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m only on chapter 4 but enjoying your story greatly...almost a Mission:Impossible aspect to it. One thing I have noticed and I mention it only because I would hate for this story to disappear on us, you have failed to include a disclaimer for your story and chapters. I hope you are able to go back and do this because it would be a shame to lose a story with so much promise.
person Kathryn
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story and congratulations on the birth of your child :)