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for Obsession

by alicat999

person Gia
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning! I can\'t wait to see how it develops.
person Red Writing Hood
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH, I like this story. Sounds like Hermione is in for some serious contemplations if what I suspect is coming. Keep it up and I look forward to the next chapter.

Red
person selened
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice build up. Please keep going.
person BodyDouble
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You should definitely continue with the story. You have a very unique way with words, and your story has already hooked me.
person moriah
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, can\'t wait to read the next chapter!! Hot and a little dark, just the way I like Snape
person June W
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it! It\'s a very good start, and I can see lots of possibilities. Hmm, he has plans for her? Research assistant, apprentice, teaching assistant for his younger students? Does she understand or know that he is her protector? Looking forward to the next update!
person selened
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very promising start. I look forward to reading more.