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for A Knock at the Door

by Pearle

person Phishie
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, this is a great story! Your characters are kept in character so well that the story just flows PERFECTLY!

I\'m VERY impressed, and addicted to this story now, and after I read this I\'ll be reading any other stories I can find that you\'ve read. If it was slash, I would put it in my archives in a heartbeat!

-Phishie

Keep up the amazing work, amiga!
person Kate McGuire
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed this thouroughly. especialy the way you mellowed Severus without taking his sharp wit sarcasm away. You showed his insecurities nicely also and made the "warm fuzzy" ending believable.
person Jen
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story filled with awesomeness.
person Angie
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say your lemons were very fulfilling. You have been building this fic to a nice lemony scene and you didn't let us down. The way you portray the kid is just wonderful. Very god writing.
person Angie
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say your lemons were very fulfilling. You have been building this fic to a nice lemony scene and you didn't let us down. The way you portray the kid is just wonderful. Very good writing.
person Angie
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a most statisfying fic. You did a very good job. Thanks for giving us this story.
person firestarter
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say i loved your story the whole way through and thanx.
person snape
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the story, thanks for writing it. You might consider having a different beta go over the fic sometime, there are quite a lot of spelling and grammar errors.
person Cecikuna
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omigosh... I wasn't a SSHG fan at first, but gosh, this story is so sweet! I LOVED it it is absolutely now my favorite fanfic xD There were so many twists and turns, and the lemons weren't so bad xD Lols, the story was amazing, write soon, perhaps, with another? xD
person Talene
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was a beautiful and complete story that I have laughed and cried to. It feels complete and that sits very well with me. :) Please continue to write many such accomplished works!