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youre kidding me right? i mean even wizards I REPEAT WIZARDS CANNOT HAVE BABIES but what the hell its your story

I looooove this story!!! I especially loe d/h stories w/a pregnant harry!! Please update soon!! Can u please e-mail me when u update, i would ery much like that thankz a mil!!

i like this story so far cannot what for more

I absolutely love your story. It is soooo awesome. I can\'t wait for the rest of it. Please don\'t keep us waiting. I will start to have withdrawls.

you have to tell Draco

Ok I get that you are american, I do, but please if you don\'t know something could you ask! I\'d be more than happy to help.

In Britain the currency is Pounds not Euros.

The whole \"well I must be pregnant scene\" went a bit fast if you know what I mean.

Magic cannot be used outside of Hogwarts! Unless they have graduated, have they?

In Britain, there are no motels, no such thing, the countries just aren\'t big enough, there are either Hotels, Inn\'s, or B&B\
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It\'s a Taxi not a Cab, it just isn\'t used here.

Also even if you do insist on using the word cab, be aware that \"The guy quickly stepped on the gas and hauled ass.\" this is wrong in so many ways, it\'s petrol not gas, and the term is \"put their foot down\" and there is no hauling of ass, neither word is used in the English language.

In the majority, 99% of british people do not use the word GEE.

Nor could anyplace in britain be infested with cockroaches, it\'s too cold for them to exist here, we don\'t have them.

Jackass, another word not commonly used.

Our phone books also don\'t have a business section in that sense, we have one book (the Yellow Pages) for residential phone numbers in the surrounding area, and the business book (The Thompson Local).

Pediatricians do exist but not in such an easily accessible way, we have the NHS, if you have something anything wrong with you, even if you know what it is (pregnancy), you have to go to see a GP, and then they refer you to the local Pediatrician who IS based in a hospital, it\'s the way things work, also to note medical care is completely free, the only thing you have to pay for is prescriptions, and they are all the exact same price regardless of what you need. The only other option would be o pro private but not only would that cost way too much and would need soooo much paperwork filled in that it would be impossible for a fifteen year to to fake it, even with magic.

Really do you expect us to believe that a muggle wouldn\'t question a guy that said he was pregnant?

All in all you need to develop the plot, the characters and the spelling a lot more to make this a really good story.

hello. well you have a good story. you seem to speed through things dont ya? ; ) anyway other than that you have a good storyline and i hope draco will find out and oh i loved their reactions when they woke up. but anyway write more.

ok I\'m reading this story and I like what I see. it would mena a lot to me if you were to keep writing!

The story is quite good, but it is going so extremely fast. Maybe you could slow down a little in the next chapter and give the chapter a bit more depth, if you know what i mean. But it is good anyway, and I\'m eager for you to update :)

Good story. i\'m liking it so far. only constructive thing i could offer would be to put more detail into it. Also with the last chapter i just think that the Doctor was way too accepting with harrykins condition. granted the dr. specialises in weird pregnacies but its not everyday you meet a man who thinks he\'s pregnate. they could have ran some tests instead of being so \"ok cool.\" about it. But i\'m just saying. Also more detail. the chapters seem to be over before they even start. if you put somemore detail into it maybe the chapters would be longer (hint ^_^).

But anyway. Hope i helped, love the story!
Lena