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person ziona2000
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am dying for an update!!!!! please soon!!!
person jaxraven
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*adoration and worship* The world needs a few more fics wherein Dumbledore isn\'t perfect... and for an angstfic, this is definitely going in all the right directions! The only real bone I could possibly pick with it is that there\'s a tad too much insight into other peoples\' heads and not enough into Harry\'s - it reads like it is focused on him but the overall perspective is just a tad too godlike for it to click in spots. That said, let me repeat, Adoration and Worship! This is a delight to read and I desperately hope you keep writing!

- Jax -
person ziona2000
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fantastic bloody start to the story! can\'t wait to read more
person S. Grey
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing ^^- Greatly amused. Nice plot, def. Better then most I\'ve read lately. x-x
person dobbiessweetie
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have read the first few chapters and though I would like to continue to read your story...You are making me dizzy. Your story doesn\'t fit on the screen without me having to slide the bar at the bottom back and forth for each line. After reading the three chapters I am now sick to my stomach. If next time you post a chapter,it\'s still like this then I will discontinue to read your story. Sorry, but i haven\'t got the time to fuck with it.
person Special K
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That\'s it?!?!?! Don\'t get me wrong, I loved the chapter, but you must write more!!! I\'m so happy you decided to update ^_^
person ziona
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bloody fantastic beginning to the story! I can\'t wait to read what is done to Uncle Vernon. Maybe something similar will have to happen to his son right in front of him? Me bad? And Why oh Why would the headmaster put truth potion in harrys tea? Stupid old man! Can\'t wait for the next chapters!
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I seriously can\'t wait to read more! You really have to update soon! I seriously wanna read more, even if you don\'t get many reviews! C\'mon, It\'s killing me to wait! I can\'t wait to read more!
Snape: Patience is a virtue...
Crystal56: Just like gluttony is one of the seven sins...
Snape: I\'m...not...fat...
Crystal56: Harry told me you were putting on a little weight...
Snape: That damn boy...
Crystal56: Eh.
Snape: ?_?
Crystal56: *shrugs and leaves*
Snape: What the hell just happened?

Please update soon! I wanna read more! *sobs* WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Gina
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am afraid scrolling from side to side to read this story is making me sea sick. Too weary for logical review. I hope it is something you can fix for the next chapter . . . hint, hint ;)
person Sailor Sol
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well done, showing the darker side of Harry without going overboard. People do that sometimes.

If you need a , le, let me know. :D