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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey love the story so much!! yum yum! lol. write a sequel? please?!
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the story it was very sweet and funny. I love this paring with a passion. The only thing that needed work was the grammer, which is not really your falt. But other than that it was brillant, I loved the ending.
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
eh... Sorry for not having left my review before, but, believe me, I haven\'t had the time... Anyway, I\'ve already read the last chapter!
And, wow, Sirius is definitely sexy when he eats strawberry -especialy if he\'s not wearing anything to cover his torso... :P-. I liked this chapter, you didn\'t only managed to make Sirius seem sexy, but it was also really funny. So, good work! ^^
I still think Remus is cruel... specially for doing what he does to Sirius at the end -d\'you think he deserved to be left alone in the floor?... well maybe a little :P-
And the rock lyrics quotage is always a bonus... heh. It may seem stupid but, It actually happens to me that sometimes I find myself quoting sentences of a song... That\'s music obsession, I suppose :P
Anyway, loved my present, And I\'m looking forward to reading the epilogue... -heh :P-
And, wow, Sirius is definitely sexy when he eats strawberry -especialy if he\'s not wearing anything to cover his torso... :P-. I liked this chapter, you didn\'t only managed to make Sirius seem sexy, but it was also really funny. So, good work! ^^
I still think Remus is cruel... specially for doing what he does to Sirius at the end -d\'you think he deserved to be left alone in the floor?... well maybe a little :P-
And the rock lyrics quotage is always a bonus... heh. It may seem stupid but, It actually happens to me that sometimes I find myself quoting sentences of a song... That\'s music obsession, I suppose :P
Anyway, loved my present, And I\'m looking forward to reading the epilogue... -heh :P-
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As I said to you, I just *love* my birthday present :D
It\'s a very funny fic, and I love the way you\'re developing it. I like the fact that you start introducing the conflict between Remus and Sirius on the prologue, and then in the first chapter you explain how it started. And seeinriusrius trying to seduce Remus is just hilarous!
Oh, and you managed to make the characters appear so sexy... yum... -okay, I stop drooling now-.
And I love the self-control that Remus manages to keep, so, well done!
It\'s also a good thing that you put the disclaimer for the words of Hetfield and all that is related with Metallica that appears in the fic.
And, just one last thing:
Rita, I suppose you were referring to Hetfield\'s words and Metallica\'s songs when you talked about \"quotation marks\". Well, I agree completely with you in the fact that it\'s always important to make people understahat hat it\'s yours and what it\'s not in a fic.
Also, as a fic writer, I found it very useful when a reader points out a mistake to me in one of my works. But don\'t you think it\'d have been more useful if you actually pointed out the mistake in your review? But, hey, maybe it\'s just me being unnecessary polite with other people works.
Anyway...
Thanks Dahpne for the fic! :D
It\'s a very funny fic, and I love the way you\'re developing it. I like the fact that you start introducing the conflict between Remus and Sirius on the prologue, and then in the first chapter you explain how it started. And seeinriusrius trying to seduce Remus is just hilarous!
Oh, and you managed to make the characters appear so sexy... yum... -okay, I stop drooling now-.
And I love the self-control that Remus manages to keep, so, well done!
It\'s also a good thing that you put the disclaimer for the words of Hetfield and all that is related with Metallica that appears in the fic.
And, just one last thing:
Rita, I suppose you were referring to Hetfield\'s words and Metallica\'s songs when you talked about \"quotation marks\". Well, I agree completely with you in the fact that it\'s always important to make people understahat hat it\'s yours and what it\'s not in a fic.
Also, as a fic writer, I found it very useful when a reader points out a mistake to me in one of my works. But don\'t you think it\'d have been more useful if you actually pointed out the mistake in your review? But, hey, maybe it\'s just me being unnecessary polite with other people works.
Anyway...
Thanks Dahpne for the fic! :D
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, the last review was mine.
And yeah, I\'m so estupid that I forgot to sign it *sighs*.
So... By Qfapo.
And yeah, I\'m so estupid that I forgot to sign it *sighs*.
So... By Qfapo.
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Their called \"quotation marks\", hun. They\'re there for a reason.