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for Hidden Within

by Monica

person Anon
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Zee
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. When are you going to update this? More please

person Cassandra
schedule April 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really hope this is getting lighter. But I would like to read more.
person kaljinxi
schedule March 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! this is very good, but very disturbing. i cant wait to see what you are going to do with this next. what happened though? something that would kill everyone is completely beyond me! are people alive outside hogwarts? i thought that the thing snape does with dumbledore was particually good - now even if the others do come back to life, then the reader still doesnt know what will happen to dumbledore. good twist.

this is excellent :)