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Crap it didn't work

It funny, how in EVERY SINGLE ONE of your fics, you never have any foreplay, or any decent lead up to the smut. Oh, and by the way, your smut sucks.

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SO FUNNY! Weird but funny! Good job

Mutton dagger, Ol\' blind Bob, Hanging Johnny, Fishing rod, Tally wacker, Pocket rocket,One eyed trouser trout,ding dong,Ankle spanker, Pork sword, Engine cranker,Hairy hot dog,Davy Crockett,Willy! Wang,Wahzoo,Weenie wacker, Pecker,Pee Pee,Kidney cracker,Heat seeking moisture missile,Giggle stick,Love whistle,Tube steak,Uncle Dick, PURPLEMET MET WARRIOR! ~ tom green

man, theres nothing wrong with writing about sex, but try to be imaginative! and thats different from being weird and raunchy. dude.

anou... you\'re odd boyo... hmm but alas I suppose all that shounen ai jill and me were talking about inspired you.. or was it just your erotic pleasure spilling out onto the page.. oh well have a fun summer... I should have read this before.. then I could have hurt you at summer school ^__^ well ja!