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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that you decided to continue this. The first chapter was quite haunting and I enjoyed the second chapter as well. Although used frequently, owls back and forth give the characters to show relationship growth and attachment. The narrative style allowr a r a lot of information to be given succinctly.
I loorwaorward to updates.
I loorwaorward to updates.
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Suggestions? Much ice-cream eating! I leave the details to you... No honestly, write whatever you like, I will read!
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. I like the idea of them exchanging letters.
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July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
My suggestion is just to let their friendship develop. Baby step it, if you will. It\'s amazing enough that these two are becoming friends.
Cool that you created the formerly unknown little sister.
My suggestion is just to let their friendship develop. Baby step it, if you will. It\'s amazing enough that these two are becoming friends.
Cool that you created the formerly unknown little sister.
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July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey great chap cant wait wait for more keep them coming they really are cute!!
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July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!!
Hermione and Draco were perfectly in character!!
I could really see Hermione living in Ealing and I loved the inclusion of a sister, I\'ve often wondered about siblings for her!!
I think i\'ll let you make up your own mind about happen dg thg their visit, you\'ll make it good whatever it is!!
Kisses
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Hermione and Draco were perfectly in character!!
I could really see Hermione living in Ealing and I loved the inclusion of a sister, I\'ve often wondered about siblings for her!!
I think i\'ll let you make up your own mind about happen dg thg their visit, you\'ll make it good whatever it is!!
Kisses
GrrArrg
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a gretorytory. I would love to see more to it. You have a wonderful beginning. Please keep it up.
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Zephyr
WOW...I must say that this is a great ion!ion! It was wonderfully written...I especially loved all the detail you put into it. I think it would be brilliant if you were to continue this story...it would be quite interesting to see what you come up with. I really liked that it wasn\'t too out there...its believable that draco would want to take away his life and you didn\'t make hermione get all lovey for him right off the bat...i dont like it when people do that...those fictions are always pieces of shit...you know what i mean? Yea...so i just wanted to tell you...thank you for writing this and sharing it with others...
Glenda
WOW...I must say that this is a great ion!ion! It was wonderfully written...I especially loved all the detail you put into it. I think it would be brilliant if you were to continue this story...it would be quite interesting to see what you come up with. I really liked that it wasn\'t too out there...its believable that draco would want to take away his life and you didn\'t make hermione get all lovey for him right off the bat...i dont like it when people do that...those fictions are always pieces of shit...you know what i mean? Yea...so i just wanted to tell you...thank you for writing this and sharing it with others...
Glenda
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really good please write more!!