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by Nobara

person Druscilla Malfoy
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic. It\'s the first story I\'ve read in a while that made me get that swooping feeling in my stomach. Lovely, darling. Just ... lovely.
person pamma
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, awsom starting! i\'m glad i found this lovely story! It\'s so cute when the picture kiss each other!!
person pamma
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, that was HOT! my friend! keep it coming!!
person pamma
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eww, his parents know?! HAHA that would suck!
person Lina
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Nobara!

It\'s Lina, Holly\'s friend. She told me about your story and I had to read it! It\'s great! I hope you\'ll write more stories soon :)

I just love this story...even the name - which is positively inspired lol! Please write more when you get the chance!

Lina
person Noella
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!
That has to be one of the best fan fics I have ever read! I have read quite a few in my day and most of them are just stupid plotless, boring, porn story\'s, written by horny preteens I might add. But this actually had a point to it and it was so romantic. You did a great job of describing all of the emotions they were experiencing in the second chapter. And the little bit of humour added in the epilogue was cool to (Mrs. Potter saying they had a ... rough night.). Anyhoo, I must be off to continue the never ending hunt for more awesome fanfics to read and also to get something to eat cuz my belly is hungry! Once again Great job and ENCORE BRAVO MORE MORE!!!!

-Sincerely Noelle Potter Misstakes Webmiss #2
person laurence
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Waouw!
I loved it! Useally, I only read long fics but, one night, I told myself \'It\'s late, a little fic and I go to sleep\', and then I read yours...
It was really good, I loved everything, you didn\'t go to fast and you described so well the feelings of the boys! It was really exciting too...
So, Will there be a sequel? Don\'t know... It\'s up to you but I like your style so...
person TicTac
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, any chance of a sequel. Are the boys going to stay together, and how will Harry be born if they do?
person Narcissus
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant fic! I loved the lemon and the epilogue! Will there be a sequel?