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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really good. Thats the best one I\'ve read yet!
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good song match up for SS.
Sad fic.
Sad fic.
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story was really good, the way Snape reflect on his feelings and his life are totally believable within Canon. I also liked the build up and the flow of your story. And you made me see Snape in a different light.
But 1 thing, get rid of the last paragraph, it\'s too..., mushy (got no better word). And it doesn\'t give anything extra to your story, on the contrary it even takes away some of the feeling of really being in Snape\'s head.
I think it would be much better to let your story end with the \"Rock/ island never cries\" sentence. Because it is already clear he commits suicide and this way it become\'s some kind of anti-climax.
okay, my $0,02
Lycanthropiclady
But 1 thing, get rid of the last paragraph, it\'s too..., mushy (got no better word). And it doesn\'t give anything extra to your story, on the contrary it even takes away some of the feeling of really being in Snape\'s head.
I think it would be much better to let your story end with the \"Rock/ island never cries\" sentence. Because it is already clear he commits suicide and this way it become\'s some kind of anti-climax.
okay, my $0,02
Lycanthropiclady
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT