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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an incredibly unpleasant story. It is, however, wonderfully written, wonderfully imagined and very, very interesting. I would like to know if he is the traitor
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story!
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant and sad. Thanks.
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very compelling! You perfectly captured the desperation of the moment. For a PWP it was quite good. Thanks for writing.
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice job. I thoroughly enjoyed this and could see a full story being written from it.
If you should find the time to continue this, please email me. I would be most
interested in reading it. You have captured Snape\'s character in such a way that
makes him still very dangerous and very mysterious. Bravo!
Hugs,
Corazon
If you should find the time to continue this, please email me. I would be most
interested in reading it. You have captured Snape\'s character in such a way that
makes him still very dangerous and very mysterious. Bravo!
Hugs,
Corazon
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. Very bittersweet.
Was Severus trying to tell Hermione that he was the leak and that she shouldn\'t trust him? I\'m guessing.
Had the feeling that Severus had a stronger emotional attachment to Hermione than he was comfortable with.
I look forward to your future works.
Was Severus trying to tell Hermione that he was the leak and that she shouldn\'t trust him? I\'m guessing.
Had the feeling that Severus had a stronger emotional attachment to Hermione than he was comfortable with.
I look forward to your future works.
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. I hope you write more...I know you said that it is just Hermione\'s point of view. I hope the Severus isn\'t the informant. I suspect that Severus suspect Hermione as the informant though...if it\'s not himself. If you write from his point of view, please continue on this thread. then you can alternate! That would be so awesome!
Innogen
Innogen
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was most excellent! I hope that this isn\'t a one shot, it\'s too good to stop here. Very well done !!! Bravo!
Live long and prospTitaTitania
Live long and prospTitaTitania
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story. it\'s a wonderful setup for a longer work of fiction and i think you\'ll do very well at it. i\'ll keep my eye out for more of your work.
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderfully written story. The way it ended, it seems as though you don\'t intend to continue on with it. I sincerely hope that\'s not the case. It was greatly a pleasure reading it...