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for Trust

by KTWelsh

person angel
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really really love the story i think i could have made a big story out of it but still i love it i hope to read more of your stuff.

angel
person moe
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story!! do i smell a sequel at all??????
person STYX
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. The best SS/HG stories are the non-fluffy ones.Very good characterisation of both.No OOC....and the ending is amazing!!!
person wolfen
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was very good. The emotional component was very well written. I know you said this was a one shot, but you have certainly laid the groundwork for a very intriquing longer story. Who was the informant? How would Snape and Hermione deal with this incident in the future? Does Snape love Hermione? What were his motivations in helping her (he is a Slytherin after all). Please consider continuing this.
Cheers,
wolfen
person Vampire_Exotica
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Would love to here more of this story! I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. Do you plan to write another chapter? or more like this? Well anyway I\'m a fan. :)
person Anon
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say.... woah.
person Elayne
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a beautiful story. Brought tears to my eyes.
person Shadoe Austere
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Magnificent. Truly an inspiring piece of work. Very emotional, and touching. You were able to draw me into the storyline which was pleasing in itself, especially at the end; nearly had tears in my eyes. Such a wonderful story can only come from the mind of a wonderfully talented writer. I salute you.
-Shadoe SIRII Solaris Austere
person Patatita
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. Pasionate, full of wonderfull descriptions of emotions, scenes and the dialoge it\'s fantastic. Lovely style. Great job!!
person bellasol67
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved this...so intense...this would have been perfect even without the sex...great job.