rate_review Reviews

The only thing I have to say is...... MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE.

I feel like I\'ve been left hanging. I want to know how and why Harry is agreeing to do this, I want to know what Draco\'s going to do with this knowledge. How did Hermione get to this point? What about Ron? Will she tell him or screw up and call Draco\'s name some time?

As for the critical aspect of this review. You need to snag a beta reader to help fix some small typos and you need to tweak the spacing and layout of the story. Nothing major it\'s just that it\'s all crushed together making it awkward to read in spots. Cosmetic changes really.

Please do post more.

If I don\'t see a second chapter I\'ll be seriously angry!! SEXY!

Hi! I really enjoyed this! I hope that you continue it. Keep up the great work. I thought that you kept it true to the characters, especially Hermione. It was interesting to see how Harry interprets Draco, too...

Wow! I really really love this! Your story is ace! But one thing: I think Draco should have stayed behind, somehow hidden as Harry left, and then he should go up to Hermione and have some fun with her! I would really have liked to see that!

Is there going to be more chapters to this story? I hope there is.

Lol. Leonora.

Update with Draco\'s reaction!

For your frist story it was really good. I do believe you should contiue the story. Although I\'m a little lost on why Harry would just give in to her like that....that should be explained a little more or better. I like your style and they way you have put things together. I really can\'t wait to read more by you. Kudos and Good Luck!
PAP

wow this could totaly be a several chap fic it leavs the endig open to so many wonderful senearios varry good for your first story

Wow! You should so continue this! I\'d very much like to see Hermione\'s fantasies come true.

what, you expected to leave it like that? of course you should continue. there shouldn\'t have even been a question. i must say, i didn\'t like how it ended. with hermione crying i mean. i can understand her confusion though. she\'s apparently in love with ron, but in lust with draco, and has to act it out with harry. what a tangled web she weaves. i would very much like to see how harry and her interact with ron. it would be interesting to know how they hide something like that from their best friend. also, draco\'s reaction needs to be explored. it would be nice to see all three guys develop feelings for hermione and then let the best man win. it\'s just up to interpretation about who the best man is. who\'s your pick?