rate_review Reviews

You are an absolute God of Fanfiction. This has got to be the absolute best HP fanfic I have ever read in my life, really. Your writing is wonderfully elegant. I was enthralled to the very end and a brillant conclusion it was. I just wanted to tell you that your effort was most definitely not wasted. Thank you for the giggles and smiles.

That was really good. the metaphor of the fine line and then a more visual, actual fine line was a creative genious idea.

I couldn\'t wait to review this so I didn\'t go and sign in. Brilliantly written. So often with fics lots of young writers come in and write fics with very basic language and no character depth, but you...you (though i have no idea what age you are, it doesn\'t matter) came in and wrote a story with suprising depth and lovely characterization. I am astounded and that was only one chapters. Very awesome job, I can\'t wait to read more!

Wow. That was amazing, extermely intense(sp?). It is so well crafted, the words used the personalities fit wonderfully, everything seemed amazingly real almost. I read the frist half before I went to work and the second half later and I wasn\'t disappointed at all. The whole time I was at work I kept think about this story. It truly a work of art. Kudos. I can\'t wait to read more stuff done by you.
PAP

awwwwww that was sooo sweet

That\'s about as realistic as anyone\'s ever going to get in slash and their particularly bizarre relationship. Well-written and~~ sensitive!!!!!

I liked this, though I found it a bit hard to follow.bit bit wordy.