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for The Fine Line

by Andreas

schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA OMG,When I read the line Off to be a wizard, the most wonderful wizard of all, I actually read it in tune to the Yello Brick road song. We must have been mentally linked at the moment. : ) (not that i'm saying my mental capacity is anywhere near yours. I could never write something this amazing)
person jessica
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fuck me that was fantabulous! inspired really, you are a genius. props.
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn. you are definitively one of the most developed and amazing writers i have yet encountered. i love the way you put forth draco\'s personality,all the little sides that make him who he is: that is what brings depth to a story. the rose\'s thorns kind of made me cringe (not a blood-fanatic i am) but other than that i love love LOVED it! now i\'ll move on to read some more of your brilliant work. xxx
person Reba Williams
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow... I mean, damn WOW!

and of course, thank you - for giving that to us!

Reba
person Zentiis
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very intense and well written, great work! Your desriptions were wonderful, i\'m honestly very impressed ^^
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Very well written. The sarcasm and witty combacks were perfect. And I loved the vocabulary use and how you portrayed them both. Amazing. Keep up the good work!

-Black
person Dadella
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Speaking of amazing...
BLOODY BRILLIANT! comes to mind...

I LOVE your vocabulary... Your writing style... Your vision...
The entire thing is just... BEAUTIFUL!

I\'m definately counting this as a favourite...
it was so... RICH... It had me laughing, it had me somberly mesmerized by their emotions... It had me angry at their stubborness...

...
so...
powerful...

in one word?: WOW

*an amazingly LOUD round of applause ensues, considering it\'s just one person, here, clapping*
person Shame Ness
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought that it was rather nice, and am sad that it has ended. but life shall go on.

aj
person Rousy_P
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Blink* Is it just me or there\'s something wrong with this posting? There\'re some coding errors (words linking together, blurs of letters that mean nothing at all...) and then there\'s:
Ah, Granger. Hangs about like a bookish terridoesdoesn\'t she?

Of love?

What was it they said? There\'s a fine line between love and hate? But, surely, that was just
person AoiGensou
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. That was... incredible. Possibly one of the best Harry/Draco stories I have /ever/ read. Thank you.