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for Going Through the Motions

by thrawn5678

person Queen mAlice
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, poor seamus...
person ravenfrog
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story so far, and I do feel bad for Seamus, but I don\'t want to see H/S as the final pairing. I think you should make it S/Dean and H/Draco. I know Dean\'s been acting unaccepting up to this point, but that can be because he was in denial of his own jealousy, or something. Just a thought.
person drake
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think seamus deserves harry. or maybe you could even make them a threesome? i just think that even though im a draco/harry fanatic i hate to see seamus hurt like that. i wouldn\'t mind if it turned out to be a sf/hp/dm.
person ladyblaze2511
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! great fic! I am usually a h/d fan, but i love h/s ones too, and you don\'t find many, and even less that are so well written. I hope you make this mostly h/s. please!!!!!!! keep up the good work!

ladyblaze2511
person ladyblaze2511
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, i forgot to say in my previous review that i noticed that you are a buffy fan! i lvoe that epsiode, have in on dvd, and i have the soundtrack! you rock! oh, also, i hope that ron comes around soon and that he isn\'t the spy. i dont like it when ron doesn\'t stick by harry\'s side. i mean, they ARE gryffindors, who are most loyal, so it doesn\'t make sense that he would stay mad at harry for long.
ladyblaze2511
person PrideAndPrejudice
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is wickedly excelent(did I spell the right? oh well)! I must say I want to beat the crap out of Ron though! Grrr how dare he that little two face weasel kissing jerk....ok better now, breath. I love the fact that you brought seamus in I love the guy so much and he is perfect for Harry right now...can\'t wait to see how Draco works his way in. I wouldn\'t care if you killed Ron of at this point unless he comes to terms and what not (I think I\'m joking I\'m not sure...eek!). Keep up the good work and I can\'t wait for more!KUDOS
PAP
person IceBlueRose
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ron\'s such a prat. That\'s my decision. LOL. Now that I have that out of the way, let me say that I love the way you\'ve pretty much been taking the titles of the chapters from the songs of the Buffy musical. I just love that show. As for wanting Harry with Seamus or Draco...you\'ve actually got me torn, which is a shock. Usually, I\'m like \"Yay Harry/Draco!\" even if I know the pairing will never happen in the actual books...it\'s pretty to imagine. ^_^ But while I\'m reading this, Seamus is acting like such a good friend and then his having feelings for Harry...oh I feel bad for him. It\'s warring with my \"Harry and Draco should get together\" side. So I\'ll look forward to the missing chapters and wait to see how the drama will continue to unfold! Wonderful story!
person Pamela
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!!!!!!!! This chapter was great:) Can\'t wait for the next one!
person Sophie
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
since you said the plot is flexible... HARRY AND SEAMUS NEED TO BE TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update soon... i need to kno wat happens!!! PLEASE
person Carolyn
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a brilliant story and I feel soooo sorry for Seamus, please get chapters up so we can see him happy again!! Keep going its brilliant!