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for Going Through the Motions

by thrawn5678

person YaoiBatman
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG Please put Seamus with Harry!! XD This is the perfect fanfiction for that pairing, and I hope you do put in a little Draco/Harry too! ~_^ hehe, how am I kidding, just duplicate Harry so he can be with both. :)

Nice writing, keep it up!
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, normally I wouldn't touch anything Harry/Seamus with a ten foot pole. But I'm finding myself rooting for Harry and Seamus getting together! You must be a good writer! ;-)
person crimson_phoenix_13
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Squall, I just finished reading all ten chapters of'Going Through The Motions' (and I must say, that was some ingenious use of 'Once More, With Feeling' lyrics for the chapter titles), and I was wondering if any more was going to be written at all as it hasn't been updated in a very long time, and I was quite getting into the story. I was especially looking forward to however you were going to bring Draco and Harry together. Anyway, hope to hear something, if not I won't be offended and will probably just think you don't check your reviews anymore. Phoenix.
person blah
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow!!!! this is an awesome story!!!!!!!!!! its getting to me in so many different ways. i personally think that seamus and harry should deffinetly get back together!!!! not that i dont like harry/draco action but harry/seamus is a pairing you dont see enough of and you do it very well.

please continue this soon **begs on knees**
person vbollman
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Geez, can we say tears are falling. i almost had to go for my box of kleenex(which by the way are sitting on top of my computer, just in case) in order to get through chapter 10. I understand what harry\'s doing but still............do me a favor huh, and leave him one person who will love him and stick by his side other then hermonie.....

other wise i loved it.
person Merry
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I loved this fic, very well done! I nearly cried, poor Seamus, poor Harry! Oh and Once More With Feeling rocked! I so heart a singing Spike! The chapter titles gave me a happy I know what that\'s from feeling! lol Well, my babble is now complete. Please continue, I look forward to future chapters!
~Merry~
person Allin Aspire
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i really enjoy your fanfic. It is so like out harry to give up his own happiness to protect the ones he care about.
Poor dear harry T_T it is really nice bit of work, and I\'d like to see how the events twist and turn in the future.
keep up the good work, i\'ll be reading ^^
person Uncertainties
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"Good job, Squall\" lol, J/k

Your doing an awesome job, i really like the plot to this one, and i\'m still trying to figure out who the little snitch could be.. ., oh i liked the part with the racoon.

can\'t wait till the next update.
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for chapter 11! Who is the mole! A girl is the leader of the group? Draco was at that meeting. Who else would mention his father? Actually feel sorry for Harry! I mean yes Seamus is hurt but Harry has to hurt and be pressured by his two remaining friends but deal with everything else.
person zentiis
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story! it\'s really well written with an interesting storyline!
the only thing i could find fault was their was not enough DRACO! *Zentiis loves her blonde pretty boy*
as for seamus....well yeah...he\'s a \'nice boy\' and all, but he just doesn\'t match up to draco ^_-