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i sort of liked this last chapter. it was a neat idea about explaining how hermione first became feral and even how she changed back waaaay back in second year. the thing that troubled me was how sexual it was. they were only 12! i know, even 12 yr olds get sexually aroused, but i just think it could have been handled in a more... innocent way. anyway, i look forward to the next couple chapters.

Very nice chaptes, though I\'ll admit to wishing for a look in on Hermione\'s session with the Nurse. I don\'t think Harry\'s going to sleep easy for a while, not while knowing Tim and his friends are up to the same tricks as Harry was during his first year.

Awesome set of chapters. I do have one little question that may have fallen by the wayside. Did Hermione ever start using the buttplugs?

what a revolting development. poor hermione. there will be hell to pay when they find the culprit. it\'s probably tim, just to throw everyone for a loop lol. and i was thinking who the mystery rider was, seems quite comical if my assumption is correct. i am kind of flabbergasted (love that word) that harry was allowed back on the quidditch team. he should be on it, don\'t get me wrong, but if he had to pass a physical, he shouldn\'t be. i mean everyone at hogwarts would know his condition and you had pomfrey and hooch do the exam. hard to believe they would pass him. can\'t wait to see what\'s in store next.

Love the story so far... Just want to give some warning, becareful with side plots (the picture plot, etc) as you can get to far into them and it will be hard to get back to the other plots you have laid out (harry/hermione, butt plugs, harry\'s teaching, ron/luna, etc)

Very good and interesting story.

I\'m kind of hopeing for Harry/Hermione/Ginny, but mostly I\'m just hoping you\'ll update soon.

Just so everyone knows, there IS a Hermione/Ginny/Harry three way coming up. And it\'s just a first of a tour-de-force of three ways coming. Unfortunately you\'re going to have to wait until chapter 30 before it starts. The next chapter 25 and 26 will be up this weekend (barring technical problems of the site). \"The Muggle Town of Hogsby\" where some serious shit stirs up involving Hermione\'s breasts. And \"Witch Hunt\", trouble brews when muggles seek to expose the magical world!

Two chapters per week will be published until further notice, well past chapter 30 at this point I can promise,

What\'s coming

The Secret Nurse returns

A missing chapter involving the history of Harry Potter and Hermione Granger from year two.

And Harry must deal with the secret of why he\'s stuck a furry in Otherworld and what he must do to return to normal

All this and a bucket of sodomy coming up in;

\"Harry Potter and the Secret Nurse\"

Umm... Is Ginny going to end up with Harry and Hermione? Or is she gonna end up with someone else (cheering for Harry/ginny/Hermione

hey there. long time no review. you have an epic story in the making. ch. 22 and they have their first dada class. it\'s a long way to go before they face voldemort, i would say. it seems harry was out of sorts this chapter, but you definitely dropped hints for upcoming things. the guitar bit at the end was interesting, if out of the blue. i have to wonder what that has to do with the plot but hopefully you\'ll let us in on the secret soon. \'what\'s up with the cat bit?\' seems to be a little running gag in otherworld, and a mystery. why is harry a cat there? too many questions! i look forward to the answers.

Once again, good chapter, more like a smooth transition for the what\'s coming next. Great read so far.

Only problem is that Cho is in seventh year, not sixth, so she could not be in the same class as the rest of the gang or else you need a good explanation for it. If you ever needa beta for your work, I would be glad to volunteer.

congratulations