rate_review Reviews

Hey, I like your story.It\'s really good. Seeing a nice Dudley was a fresh change, but I have one objection. Harry\'s profane use (I\'m only up to chapter 12 and I saw it at least once) of the word Jesus Christ. I \'m a good Christian, and I love HP, hell I even write my own fanfic, but to use our Lord and Savior\'s name in HP is really wrong. There should be a seperation, at least IMO. Like the people in HP world (canon correct or not) even mention Jesus, God, or the devil?I mean, to them it doesn\'t exist.I know I can chose to take it or leave it, but hey it\'s a review.You can always delete it, if you don\'t like it. I just think it gives HP a bad name when you try to incorporate Jesus, even by using his name, in vain. Does Harry REALLY KNOW about Christianity?I\'d think not. More Snape,please?He\'s too great to be left out. And I\'m glad that Umbridge got what was coming to her. Hah hah hah.

hope there is more!:)

This is so good. One of the best fan fictions I read in a long time. PLEASE update really soon, I cant wait to find out what happens.

I think this is a awsome fic!

Really good..cant wait for the next chapters

lovin the story

This is story is geting better and better...but i am lucky i figured out that you moved the story to adult fanfiction...when i couldent find it i thought that u ended it but then i figured it out! YAY GO ME! lol

Great story, I so loved it. Please update soon, cant wait to find out what happens.

K

I absolutely loved your story. I had to tear myself away, just go to work, or go to bed. It was the only story I read all week, so I wouldn\'t get distracted. Please e-mail me when you update again. I can\'t wait to read more.


Jeannette
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I think that it should be a permenant Harry/hermione/Ginny pairing. Oh and good job on a wonderful story.