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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting part.
More soon, please.
More soon, please.
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
for a sec i was even more confused than the last chapter but atleast its back to hogwarts now and stuff i understand more chapters and please no more crazy ones
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok this chapter makes no sense what the hell was the point
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT WAS CH 31 ABOUT
I LIKED 32 IT WAS NICE
I LIKED 32 IT WAS NICE
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story but needs a beta for spelling and typos.That last chapter was odd and confusing(spelling?).Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in life when you can.
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK Everyone takes a deep breath ... calm down. JKR did NOT send any letter to Dan and Emma. There is no need to start one more rumor on the Net concerning the shipping war. And please Jackalman, you need to be off the pot for a while...
That was fun to read... It took me a while to get that Dan was going all Bela Lugosi on us.
That being said, shouldn\'t it be a one shot ...
That was fun to read... It took me a while to get that Dan was going all Bela Lugosi on us.
That being said, shouldn\'t it be a one shot ...
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how you mixed the \'real life\' with the \'fiction\' it was cool. I hope to see more soon.
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a...interesting chapter...i was kinda lost...well hope to get more soon
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was an amusing little veer to the left; no wonder Harry has such a good time in this story, his alter ego is the one writing it! Of course, if was a teenage boy working in close quarters with Emma Watson, I\'d probably be indulging in some hormone-induced fantasies as well...
Please don\'t abandon this; it\'s one of the absolute best NC-17 Harry Potter fics I\'ve read. Certainly it has some of the most original ideas, and the extrapolations and development of the characters is really fascinating. Yes the erotic portions of the plot are a lot of fun, but you could scale this down to an R or PG-13 fic and still have it be a marvelous read. Having the Wizarding world in danger of exposure because some slytherin git snapped a pic of Hermione topless and the Sun printed it as a page three girl? Just the latest in a whole series of marvelous twists and turns.
If you need to take a break or slow down on the chapters in order to concentrate on other things, I\'m sure your readers will understand; I still follow Lori\'s Paradigm of Uncertainty trilogy and that\'s gone as long as eight months between updates. But please, PLEASE don\'t abandon it!
Please don\'t abandon this; it\'s one of the absolute best NC-17 Harry Potter fics I\'ve read. Certainly it has some of the most original ideas, and the extrapolations and development of the characters is really fascinating. Yes the erotic portions of the plot are a lot of fun, but you could scale this down to an R or PG-13 fic and still have it be a marvelous read. Having the Wizarding world in danger of exposure because some slytherin git snapped a pic of Hermione topless and the Sun printed it as a page three girl? Just the latest in a whole series of marvelous twists and turns.
If you need to take a break or slow down on the chapters in order to concentrate on other things, I\'m sure your readers will understand; I still follow Lori\'s Paradigm of Uncertainty trilogy and that\'s gone as long as eight months between updates. But please, PLEASE don\'t abandon it!
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Odd, well and truely odd. I hope this is another dream sequence.