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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just happened to check on impulse to see if there was an update, and lo and behold, there was! Unfortunately, it wasn\'t much of a much, and didn\'t really do anything to advance the plot. Are you getting bored and giving up on this, or just suffering from writer\'s block? I don\'t care if you cut back on the adult aspects of the story, I just want to see how it ends!
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its all interesting so far but whatever damned formatting you have is killing it.
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please go to dictionary.com and look up the word \"cosality.\" It does not exist. Before you go around telling everyone how good a writer you are and how you\'re going to try to go professional, please try to become a competent amateur.
I\'ve been following this story since maybe chapter five or so, and I can\'t tell you how much I loved the first 15 or 18 chapters - I\'ve sent the reviews to prove it. But then you decided to throw in every plot idea you ever dreamed of putting in a HP fic. Catgirl is one story. Catgirl and callgirl instructor is really pushing the boundary between erotic drama and absolute farce. Catgirl, callgirl, dream world, tacit approval of sexual acts between students in any state of consciousness, weird shit from every which way that makes no damn sense being jumbled together... goes beyond my ability to continue reading. I\'ve felt this way since before chapter 22, but I guess i\'ve finally hit my limit. The benefit of the doubt has it\'s limitations, and I\'ve reached mine.
I wish you luck with this story and offer one piece of advice for the future: Please try to find a compromise between your creative ideas and the quality and maturity of your writing.
I\'ve been following this story since maybe chapter five or so, and I can\'t tell you how much I loved the first 15 or 18 chapters - I\'ve sent the reviews to prove it. But then you decided to throw in every plot idea you ever dreamed of putting in a HP fic. Catgirl is one story. Catgirl and callgirl instructor is really pushing the boundary between erotic drama and absolute farce. Catgirl, callgirl, dream world, tacit approval of sexual acts between students in any state of consciousness, weird shit from every which way that makes no damn sense being jumbled together... goes beyond my ability to continue reading. I\'ve felt this way since before chapter 22, but I guess i\'ve finally hit my limit. The benefit of the doubt has it\'s limitations, and I\'ve reached mine.
I wish you luck with this story and offer one piece of advice for the future: Please try to find a compromise between your creative ideas and the quality and maturity of your writing.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really love your story, its the most original i think i have every read. i was wondering if there was a way to send an email advisor when chapters are added, like fanfiction.net had. that way i would know when to come here. keep up the excellent work. the only thing im kinda off about is how harry and hermione have just let ginny into their sex lives and how harry is used like a tutorial. thats my only beef, and its not even that big.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What was the purpus(spelling?) for chapter 31 and how did it link to the others?Great story and a really great read please keep it up.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story and these last chapters were inspired. Shame the soccer-moms writing to Ming on FF.net screwed a lot of people.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i don\'t understand how you went from harry potter, to daniel, back to harry potter. i love your story, will read it til the end, it\'s just a little confusing now.
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the last chapter theere made alot more since...but i think i am kinda starting to understand the other chapter... i think...cant wait for the other chapters
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i need more.
email me with updates at konami2@gmail.com
email me with updates at konami2@gmail.com
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love your stories as I read all of the chapters in one sitting. pls update and i would love to see a hermione harry giny relationship, i know you have already dabbled in it but i would love to the 3 of them work out their differences and see each other a threesome basically but i guess in a relaionship main part on hermione but work ginny in more maybe. Anyway great story update soon pls.