rate_review Reviews

grejt story,
keep upp the good work.

Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.

Love your fic so far, just getting a bit to complicated in the end as if you have no more ideas for the story and trying to make something up out of blue.
Anyways, i still want to continue reading it, so please update,

I just wanted to thank you for a most enjoyable read. I was quite facinated with the way you bring up bits and pieces from the history of HP and make them all tie together. I hope you continue this story and if you do I am sure that I will enjoy reading those as well.

Highly inventive. Very enjoyable and engaging. The profanity and swearing as a form of random exclamation is jarring to me, but I am older and I know that younger people do talk that way. The story departs from any logical follow on to the real story line and the Book Six jogs it off in another direction with the introduction of Ginny as a love interest, but highly entertaining as a divergent story line. I hope to see more of your work.

Keep writing its good

I agree with Secret Nurse fan. It has been forever since u last updated. And it is obvious that you have a lot of fans who want you to update! I check at least 3-4 times a month to see if u have updated but u never have! I want to see what happens next! But whatever you do dont make another chapter that does not make any since at all. I dont understand that chapter. Could of left that one out and people wouldent have been confused lol. But I am a huge fan and i was reading your storie almost from the beggining and all a sudden you stop and then come out with 2 more chapter and then stop agian for even longer and still have not made a new chapter! UPDATE SOON PLZ!

if it werent for all the profanity and sex, i coulda sworn i was reading the next fucking harry potter book it was so fucking great. i only iddnt like a few parts of the story, either b/c i didnt like them or they palyed no real role or never got resolved at the end. One was hermione and that whole picture business was really pointless and kinda stupid. another was chapter 31 or something, entitled Life Out of Context. WTF WAT THAT ANYWAY? totaly random chapter that didnt fit in. but other than that the story was fucking awesome and im glad i didnt waste my time in reading all of it.

** grabes pitchfork** ALL RIGHT Jackalman update soon or I\'ll hunt u
down, take your shoes off and beat you to an inch of your creativity skills!!!
I dont want to sound or be mean but i love your story and realy want you to
update, even if its just to know that your still alive!!!

Secret Nurse fan

I really hope there\'s more of this coming, this story is too good to just be forgotten.

Update soon, please.

i have read this story from beginning to end and i must say it is extremely well written, and very absorbing. are there plans for anymore chapters?