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I liked Chaptar Ten just not the over kill of furry so cut it down next chapter please

Please update soon... Your chapters are nice and long which is a bonus... but i definitely wantt to see more and soon! This story is cool... thus far i have enjoyed it very much and cant wait to see it progress into the hogwarts school year and also what Minerva and Hermione are planning

Keep up the good work

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Keep i9t going man how soonf ro chapter ten

Wow I really enjoy this fanfic alot. its a great idea and most importantly so much fun to read and absolutly great job.
Cant wait for More
Melissa

I think this story is great, can\'t wait to read more.

this was a good story, but it could have been a lot better. there were some plot points that just didn\'t sit well with me and might have been more thought out. you explained dudley\'s role pretty well. at first i had to question that aspect of your story. it just seemed to out of character. i liked how it was true love that would win the war. i figure that\'s how it should end for jkr too, but for book six? harry and hermione\'s relationship seemed very far advanced for sixth year. at the end of book five they were not that close. it would have been cool for harry to discover how much he loved hermione through your story. the little figures of the trio would have been a great example of how far they could go. have hermione a bit embarrassed by the toys actions. have their love grow deeper as the story unfolded. the whole thing with the biting was just silly in my opinion. it made for a pretty intriguing kinkiness for hermione but instead of biting which is a violent act in itself, the real way to defeat voldemort should have been the ultimate expression of love from our two heroes. considering what site we on, on, it would have made more sense to defeat voldemort with sex instead of biting. i did like the idea of voldemort taking control of harry and trying tove hve him into depression and i really liked how hermione tried to heal harry but some of his scars just wouldn\'t heal. even though this is a pretty critical review, you should know that for the most part the story was well done. i just didn\'t agree with how some of the situations were handled.