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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great FF, I've enjoyed reading the development between the pairings throughout the chapters. Keep up the great work!!
Love, Hugs and Bludgers,
Trix ^_^
Love, Hugs and Bludgers,
Trix ^_^
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September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your story. I liked how Heremione wouldn't let Harry feel sorry for hisself. I laughed when Crookshanks tried to pull hisself to the attic in the Dumdwaiter. That reminded of Sylvester & Twiity cartoons. Especiallly when the rope broke.
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I hope you write soon a Harry/Hermione/Ginny threesome, poor Ginny is suffering, she deserves some cock
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September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. To tell you the truth, I did not expect to get into this story when I started it. You certainly kept my interest. Sort of like a fantasy version of Harry Potter...I like it. I hope you live up to your promise of a chapter a week. I've saved it in my favorites. I'm dying to know who the "nurse" really is. And I hope you incorporate a little more of the non-professorial Snape as he hangs around Order headquarters. It's a bit like comic relief. Not that I need any relief! :)
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please and how come it akes so llong to update
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello.
The Author . J. Just thought I'd let you all know how the story is progressing. The reason it's taking so long is I'm planning to publish this one chapter per week. The last chapter "Summer Lovers/Some are Lovers" got way out of hand was was turning out to be 30 pages long. So I chopped it up into smaller chapters averaging 10 to 13 pages each.
I could publish the other chapters right now, but logistically I'm worried about a conflict and want some things worked out a few chap ahe ahead before I publish a finale version of the next chapter, which BTW is titled "The Basement of Black". Just what the heck did the fasmily keep in that basement anyway? Where the hell did all those Doxies come from? And Harry and Hermione are forced to come clean about the death of Voldemort.
I'm sorry it's taking so long for the story to come out, but the good news is with the plotting I've worked out from working so far ahead in the story, I'm gauranteeinu'reu're going to be seeing new and fresh stuff every week. Try to think of it as a serial. Also, I can gaurantee that a few chapters coming up will be much longer than the most recent publications. Let me give you a few previews as to what's coming up.
Harry sponsors a student at Hogwarts.
There's a rescue mission to save the train to Hogwarts from sabotage.
A new and special inter-house tournament will be planned at Hogwarts in the spring, just before the Quiddich cup. e see see the magical "other world" that Rowling promised in the last book, but never really delivered.
We see who the new Auror instructors are, and the new (and sexy) head of Slytherin is.
And what role will the secret nurse play at Hogwarts?
That, and a lot more all coming up in Harry Potter and the secret Nurse.
The Author . J. Just thought I'd let you all know how the story is progressing. The reason it's taking so long is I'm planning to publish this one chapter per week. The last chapter "Summer Lovers/Some are Lovers" got way out of hand was was turning out to be 30 pages long. So I chopped it up into smaller chapters averaging 10 to 13 pages each.
I could publish the other chapters right now, but logistically I'm worried about a conflict and want some things worked out a few chap ahe ahead before I publish a finale version of the next chapter, which BTW is titled "The Basement of Black". Just what the heck did the fasmily keep in that basement anyway? Where the hell did all those Doxies come from? And Harry and Hermione are forced to come clean about the death of Voldemort.
I'm sorry it's taking so long for the story to come out, but the good news is with the plotting I've worked out from working so far ahead in the story, I'm gauranteeinu'reu're going to be seeing new and fresh stuff every week. Try to think of it as a serial. Also, I can gaurantee that a few chapters coming up will be much longer than the most recent publications. Let me give you a few previews as to what's coming up.
Harry sponsors a student at Hogwarts.
There's a rescue mission to save the train to Hogwarts from sabotage.
A new and special inter-house tournament will be planned at Hogwarts in the spring, just before the Quiddich cup. e see see the magical "other world" that Rowling promised in the last book, but never really delivered.
We see who the new Auror instructors are, and the new (and sexy) head of Slytherin is.
And what role will the secret nurse play at Hogwarts?
That, and a lot more all coming up in Harry Potter and the secret Nurse.
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August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating. The whole geekiness of it ... fascinating.
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August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very strange story. Also, precum tastes salty but cum tastes kind of bitter. They say certain foods affect the taste, though. *shrug*
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August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very good story, but there are minor plot holes, the biggest being the fact that the love between Hermionie and Harry just happened to appear in about one chapter, but other than that the rest so minor that they are not worth bothering about too much, since your story is written very well. Please update soon.
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August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Maybe you should at the start of each chapter point people to the Beta you wrote, because I read this first then looked for more of your stories and found that story and it explained the background to the biting, the secret feelings that Herm holds for Harry.