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November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
@32 i love this story. i have been looking for this story for years. it was the first ever aff story i read and i was so dissapointed when i couldnt find it then just the other day i stumbled upon this. I was so happy! you have to write more!!!!
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February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You could really use a good beta ... or at least figure out someway to correct some of the major errors that I have seen. While your story is very good ... it is difficult to read. Let me know if you would like some help.
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April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked how this story went. It does give a few new twist to the world in general and some of the things that could happen. I find the way you used the Black house and increased on it great. I like the two new professors also. Please continue writing this story. I would like to find out if you are going to make this a Harry/Hermione/Ginny story now that the two girls seem to have found they both love Harry. It would also be cool to find out what happens to Dudley. I guess I will leave it at this last Part. I want to know more about the secret nurse and the way for Harry to stop being a catboy, lol.
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It is brilliantly written in all aspects: plot, character development, introduction and utilization of original characters, usage of known characters, and a sense of excitement for upcoming plot developments. I enjoyed the discoveries at the House of Black, the intentions of Harry to rebuild the House of Potter, the strengthening of characters' character and sense of self, and the revelation of various relationships. The idea of Otherworld was interesting, but what I really enjoyed was the Secret Nurse herself, too cool, where can I get one?! LOL. You should consider posting this story over at GRANGER ENCHANTED dot COM (after cleaning up the typos a bit).
Is chapter 32 the last chapter? If so would you maybe consider throwing a "The End" at the bottom of it to erase any confusion or doubts. Thanks. :-)
Thank you for the fantastic read. I'm looking forward to reading your other story.
Take care and keep up the writing.
;~D
Is chapter 32 the last chapter? If so would you maybe consider throwing a "The End" at the bottom of it to erase any confusion or doubts. Thanks. :-)
Thank you for the fantastic read. I'm looking forward to reading your other story.
Take care and keep up the writing.
;~D
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd love a continuation to this story.
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@32....this story is fucking awesome..you have to update soon!!!!!!!!!
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good. Like the story so far.
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding. Like the way the story is going. I hope Harry is strong and powerful and kicks some serious bad guy tail.
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding.
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good. Lucky Harry. I am a NIBBLIES man myself!
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