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It\'s a very nice chappie and leaves you hanging. Can\'t wait till the next!!

Love it! Love it! Love it!!! I laugh, smile and get totally turned on in one chapter!! Fabulous as always!! Can\'t wait for the next chapter!!!!!!

How wonderful! I can\'t wait to read more!! More soon ploease?

This is a really good start!! I can\'t wait for more, please please update soon.. This and Twin Link, I love both stories, you are doing a great job on both!!! Keep up the AWESOME work!!!! Happy Writing!

Star Fire

Interesting story, but given that I know SOUL SEARCHING by Quillusion very well, this seems very much a take off of that story. There is also reference to LeoGryffin\'s - THE MUGGLE (particularly the internet research components) smattered ugh ugh this first chapter as well. The Muggle references are a little more vague and they have been done by other authors as well, but the idea of the WIKTT Archives being use hig highlight SS/HG stories has been done (by Quillusion - the story is here at AFF.Net and very well known) and though there are only a certain number of possible combinations of plots, to follow with a story that whilst not directly the same; but one that uses so many similar themes, should include the original author/s as the idea behind the story.

Your story summary did intrigue me enough to click the link, but your grammar is also a little odd. Are you trying to write this in 2nd or 3rd person because if so, it\'s all very jumbled? You need to decide on a voice and stick to it or better still, find a good beta reader who can help you whip this into shape.

If you are going to continue with this idea, you do need to acknowledge Quillusion\'s Soul Searching, ditch the idea of highlighting certain author\'s stories and make it more generic.

This was never meant as a flame, but as constructive critique.

I like it, great read. Look forward to more. Thanks.