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This was GREAT!! I loved every part of it :)

I find it extraordinarily funny that you would make fun of fan fiction which \"outrageously butchers\" the English language when you don\'t have such a firm grasp on it yourself. This story has so many typos, so much poor grammar and punctuation, misuse of words, and run-on and fragment sentences that I wonder what you consider butchering the English language. It\'s a good premise, but putting the grammar patterns of a 16-year-old girl in the mouth of a 40-plus-year-old man is disconcerting. Please learn the difference between then/than and prey/pray.

Bravo.

That was awesome! \"\"What are your intentions towards me?\"\"I loved that, this was really good.

Nice lemon, cute story.

Wooooo Hoooooo!!!! I loved every split second of this fic!!!! This chapter was exceptional! You did a wonderful job it was sexy, erotic and yet filled with emotion!! Beautiful work!!! I look forward to reading more from you in the future!!!

Hey, that was fantastical great fun!! I loughed out loud several times: Severus discovering the HG/SS-fanfics in the Net, or JKR as grand grand grand daughter of Dumbledore - one of the best jokes.
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\'Tis a lovely story m\'girl!! Hope ye write many mur like it! hehe Really....I do hope you wrote more like this one. It was a delightful tale!!

Super cute and yummy ending!

Steamy ending! OO!