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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lucky Morgana! She just lost her family, but now she gets to the be the only Muggle at Hogwarts. At least she\'ll have Hermione as a friend. Hmm, wonder if that\'s why Severus offered to sponsor her? Will Morgana now be using glamour clarms to hide her identity from Death Eater kids? She\'s supposed to be dead, so this will be tricky to hide her at Hogwarts. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m addicted to your story! I love the new character, Morgan and I love how you write Snape to be. Please keep the updates coming!
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
some word context errors, but nothing big.
not sure what you want to do with Morgan the OC other than be a friend to hg. I like OCs so I am interested in what role is planned, given she is a muggle. Will she be subjected to the marriage law as well as a ward of SS?
chapter 4 is the nbest so far with a cliffy and SS announcement
SS is nicely done and so is HG.
not sure what you want to do with Morgan the OC other than be a friend to hg. I like OCs so I am interested in what role is planned, given she is a muggle. Will she be subjected to the marriage law as well as a ward of SS?
chapter 4 is the nbest so far with a cliffy and SS announcement
SS is nicely done and so is HG.
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love MLC and yours already has a different twist. A muggle in the mix. You write and I\'ll review. It\'s very interesting so far.
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is good. I can\'t believe that you\'re not getting more reviews for this! I hope that you continue your story because you\'ve got something good with this one.
Ciao!
Ciao!
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There is something really funky going on with the spacing of your story. At the top and bottom is all symbols, somhow it has double spaced itself and you have to scroll to the right to read the whole thing. Maybe you accidentally did some HTML or another code that is making it do this. You should try to look into it because it makes the story very hard to read and most people won\'t review a story that is hard to read or they may flame it.
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July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God I REALLY hate this story. I can\'t believe I wasted my time even reading it...
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it. keep it up!
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uh Oh, I think I would scream too if I saw some stranger in my house. Well, it happend with my brother ;-) ! Could Snape be the stranger (please)? Did he travelly fly floo and if yes, why is the Granger fireplace in the floo network? I like your beginning \'cause you do not see Hermione\'s muggle life very often! Keep going!
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a not a good sign ... only your first chapter and you\'re already leaving us on a clingernger! Please update soon -- must find out who the man is in Hermione\'s living room.