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for Chaos Theory

by DRanged691

person Spiderwebs11
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like this fic it's one of the most interesting takes I've seen on this challenge. I really like your character Morgan. I'm also very relieved at how in character Dumbledore is. I hate it when people make out that he's no idea whats going on in the real world or thats he's horrible and would go nuts at the idea of Severus and Hermione together. This fic rocks.
person Jami
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story so far! i love the concept of hermione's muggle friend being introduced into the magical world. cant wait till your next posting! good luck and great job!
person Gwen
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Did Snape's sister die a while ago, with her husband and only child, or is/was she alive long enought to discuss whether her two children should go to Hogwarts?

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person lacey weasley
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tis ais a very good story. I think the addition of a third party muggle was brilliant. At the moment, yours is the first I check to see if it has been updated. Thanks
person AnyuBoo
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I love all Snape/romance stories (hoping of course, that Snape does get romantic). :) But it\'s great, keep up the good work.
person maria
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaauuuugggghhhhh....evil evil cliffhanger....update please!!!!!!
person Delayed Poet *too lazy to sign in*
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now you just wait a damned minute! How *dare* you leave that chapter off like that?! What in Merlin\'s name did Ron do?! I HAVE to know! While this is not the most well-written fic I\'ve ever read it is still captivating... It is bordering on cliche *I\'ve read waaaay too many Marriage Law fics* but you do have some \"Saving Grace Plot Points\" so not all is lost.... Do you have a beta? I noticed that you had a lot of grammar and spelling errors... if you don\'t, you should either take more time editing your chapters before posting them, or get a beta to do it for you... I\'m definitely not trying to be rude at all, I\'m just trying to give ya a helpful hint. It\'s probably why you don\'t hav man many reviews as you should... you have a good plot, so keep writing! Update again soon!
.*. Tanya .*.
person kimmie
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, i absolutely love this story! update soon! :)
person droxy
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting chapter with the folks
person Olivia
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i am lovein it !!!!!!!!!plz update soon!:):):)*hugs*