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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s good. Just when the stag turns into James, Harry acts very out of character. He wouldn\'t say some lame thing about \'hows it hanging\' if he saw his father, and he would never yell at his mum. And you should reread chapter 1 since it has so many mistakes. Good story though!
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I just pulled out the big guns and went to the lexicon to think of some ideas. There is the binding/fastening charm fastens chains or restrains to someone or something Maybe the Patronus Charm, Ferula conjures a wooden rod. There is a Gripping charm, Invisiblity could be interesting, there is a permant sticking charm that might not be very fun in the end though uh that\'s all I got for you go look at the sight if you want maybe they could use some potions too those are fun
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, there\'s no other words for this story besides WOW!!
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dont care what you do just update soon
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you suggested something yourself:
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
seeing as it\'s fanficition and u can do whatever u want, i suggest u make Padfoot and Moony fuck harry. shoot that story got me so hot and bothered i can barely breathe correctly. personally i don\'t care what u do as long as it\'s more like that. good luck
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was HOT! More PLEASE!
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god!! That was fun, even though I don\'t know how harry can accept it.
really, two with engorgio charms, sound a bit painful. Sounds like a good MPREG if harry has that good dilatation.
Still, two, woa, I loved the fic.
Kisses, kathy
really, two with engorgio charms, sound a bit painful. Sounds like a good MPREG if harry has that good dilatation.
Still, two, woa, I loved the fic.
Kisses, kathy
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
how can 2 people enter a guy?
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was great, I really enjoyed myself. I don\'t have an idea for a charm, but let Harry bottom again. You write that really well.