rate_review Reviews

This sucked. You have no storyline, poor grammar and no ability whatsoever to compose a story worth reading. Go back to elementary school, perhaps you can learn to create a story that will hold our attention. Secondly, you don\'t kill off your characters at the end... it is anticlimatic. Of course, in this case I think that we were all happy to see them go. Go screw someone already and get your horniness out in that fashion. The only elemin tin this story was the sex, and that is not how you write an effective peice. Not only that, the sex scenes weren\'t even well written. The reader, as disturbing as this may sound, is supposed to feel engaged. I was bored, and repulsed at the fact that I was correcting spelling and whatnot. So, before you start click-clacking at the keyboard, please, think of theor, or, poor readers out there. Don\'t waste our time.

wtf was that? Not to be mean, but that was kinda bad. you should get a beta, you really need a beta!