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October 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The story has quite some potential, with interesting and contrasting characters: I hope you will continue it.
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November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was pretty interesting and I like the insight into Snape's life. I thought one of the most interesting plotlines in Rowling's Book V was that look into Snape's thoughts through the Pensieve. I like the exploration of snape as a deeper character. It's outt fat fascinating
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September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I luff this story! I stumbled across it and had to read all 12 chapters. 'Tis nice young Sanpey has someone... Well sort of. Will Snape find out about what Charity's father is doing to her in the next chapter????
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a fascinating story, but I'm still dreading the end. Will Severus ever find out about those scars and what her father is doing to her? Please update soon!
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiya there... Just wanted to say WOW.. I love this story and the plot line. I wish beyond hope that she goes to school with Sev and they become a couple! I'm dying for some Chairty and Sev action~ Just a lil kiss or something! so cute... They would make a great couple. Chairty going to Hogwarts would be the coolest.... Up-date soon and keep up theAT WAT WORK!! ROCK ON
---Mia
---Mia
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Sorry it took me so long, but I finally got a chance to read it all. I love it. It's sadistic in a strange, twisted way, but it's also the the loving charactersitics to it. You are going to write more...right?
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is powerful writing.
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what a refreshingly different start to a story. Love the dreamy, floating quality your writing has. This is a compulsive read, pls keep it up.
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful once again. I love your poral oal of Snape, his anxious unconfidence toward her. You\'ve done his family well too. Being from Oregon I was wondering if you were too...since that\'s where Charity is from...
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely riveting! it just amazes me that no one at AFF appreciates the really good stories. I hope you have this posted on FanFic...you deserve some good raves...
Snape is so sweet. I just makes me all misty eyed...\'Goblin wars with his littlguregures.\' Huge, huge grin...that\'s my favorite part of any story anywhere...
A lifetime supply of Bertie Bott\'s Beans for you Doll.
Snape is so sweet. I just makes me all misty eyed...\'Goblin wars with his littlguregures.\' Huge, huge grin...that\'s my favorite part of any story anywhere...
A lifetime supply of Bertie Bott\'s Beans for you Doll.