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for One Night to Give

by LadyBon Lon

person j
schedule April 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Huzzah such a sweet story. Well done.
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
very sweet :)
schedule January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
loved it that was priceless! good job.
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really sweet story... =)
person Akinaria
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked that. The penultimate line was great. One of those that one feels is so fitting that it ought to have been obvious to every writer previously, it worked really well.
person BP
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL. This story was great! The "tea with albus" scene was pure genius. *rofl*
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh I absolutley loved it! So wonderful! I swear you had me in utter shock at the wedding with the bride and neville. Wow! I swear. Ooh and with Dumbly and the tea! I swear, **** IN HYSTERICS!!! **** I absolutley loved it. Sweet... SWEET ending too.
person Kuma-chan
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM


I'm confused. If Harry was the one who buggered Severus first who come Severus didn't end up being the one pregnant? Or at least being pregnant at the same time Harry was 'cause I read they switched positions all night. After I read the part where Harry found out he was preggers I just scrolled down the story looking for the part where it said Severus was pregnant too, but I was..disappointed. What's going on???

E-mail me please

Kuma-chan
person Caitlin
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. The part about Neville was just great!!
person nichole
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
congrats on a fantastic story. and in my opinion one of the best endings ever, made me sit back and smile in contentment. hehe i wont men pau paul albus changing to peter lol. tough job chosing baby names? im just teasing you, dont take me seriously. well done and i look forward to reading from u in the future. congrats