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for Distortion (Corruption 2)

by Beren

person Jags
schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
bravo
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful job. I'm so glad you didn't drop this story. I look forward to the next one. Harry is amazing for all this character strength.
person misslala
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you wrote two other parts! :) This was awesome! :) i am heading to read the third installment, thanks for sharing@
person JJ
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So Harry becomes a pet in a cage. Better than Azkaban, definitely. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person harryhollow
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again this is a master piece and I hope, I really hope that u will Create a Corruption3. Harry and Draco move into harrys home or old and young dark creatures around the world want to meet harry!! Hey, either draco gets a bun in the oven or harry *giggles* *get it* bun in oven....heeheehee.. Anyway please think about writing another one please please please please please please please please please please please please please please...............If you don\'t want to post another one on adultfanfiction then write a draft and send it to me!!
person Nini
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, this surprised me a bit. It was just as good as the first, methinks, but it was ... strange. I mean, it was really interesting - lots of conflicts, even more angsty than the first. I loved the banshee-screaming for Draco, that really nearly brought tears to my eyes wh tho thought of how Harry felt when he had the premonition of Draco\'s death. It really moved me. But something is a bit off... perhaps it\'s all your capitalizations - My Dear Boy or My Poor Boy and all that - what\'s the capitalization for? Never mind. You\'ve done a very good job on this sequel.
All the best -
~Nini.
person Alice
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing series! I really hope you\'ll continue it. I\'ve read many fics where Harry is turned into some kind of critter or another but they\'ve always been horribly unrealistic. This is written so well and so logically it can be nothing short of believable. I also have greatly enjoyed your characterization of Draco. He\'s true ot himself but has grown beyond the petty hates of his youth. Harry is another great example of a character that has developed beyond the canon in a realistic way.

I really hope you\'ll write another part to this series that deals with Harry\'s new life. Already my mind is filled with questions of how his friends will react and what will happen with the rest of the wizarding world. Not to mention all the lovely details of how he deals with his new nature. There are so many fantastic plot points for you to elabourate on.

Thank you for su won wonderful fanfic.
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The sequel was great. had that same alluring and erotic but elegant quality as the first one
person another_loser_anthem
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was SEXY! awesum sequel 2 corruption, i luv corruption & im glad u wrote a sequel :)
person Alexi
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, fantastic story. I just got done with GTS and thought I would see what else you have done.
Great dark story with fantastic story discription. I have enjoyed how you have you have started to explain Harry\'s turmoil and how he is coping.
Keep up the great work and I look forward to any other continuations.
I must say you have a great talent to develop and carry a great story.
Thanks.