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for The Broom Closet

by Crystal56

person h
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Um, when you make a story m-preg, can you please add it as a warning? I really don't like getting surprised with it. Otherwise it's a good story.
person Katie
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you rule so much. You rule, and I love you, and I LOVE this story. Love it. Love it SOOOOOOOO much. Please update soon!
person lady mac
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wai, wai!! As much as it is nasty and revolting, it is super funny!!! keep writing!! even though I know how it's gonna end because you told me, but update soon!! wai, wai!
person Jet
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating!



Please Please update soon!


I LOVE this story.
person Jill
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I did enjoy it. Looking forward to the next chapter... thanks
person OwaranaimonoAite
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How can you leave it like that?!? I think Harry was right. Snape is just being a git and an ass Pardon my language. -__- I want to read the next chapter! I'm looking for it!
person akume
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved chapter four, however, there was a slight discrepancy towards the end of your story. Specifically, when Hermione is asking whether it's possible for males to become pregnant. In your haste to upload this chapter you typed "heterosexual relationshiphen hen it should in fact be homosexual relationships. Well, with that out of the way I' like to say thanks and keep up the good work. I can't wait for the follow-up.
person S-chan
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i'm very proud of harry, i like this fic very much, you'll continue soon, ne? 1 question, when everybody knows who he is going to say is the dad?
person Feli
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter! Lol, poor Severus. But Harry's decision was definitely right... well, please update soon! I'm looking forward to reading more of this story!
person Fae
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heehee, I hope you liked the thing I sent you. I have no idea what the plot is, but I like it. Smut was good. I do hope you weren't offened by my....remake, but it looked like so much fun! Uh...I really hope you contiue this, but seeing as you have not updated in so long, my hopes seem to be falling. How unfair to leave me on a cliff like that. Naughty Author!!! lol. Great job, cna't wait for more.
~kit~