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for The Broom Closet

by Crystal56

person amanda
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story so far cannot wait to the new chapters are up
person Sylvanus
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Someone is going to be a daddy... :))
Isn't that nice?
Now how about a wedding?
LOL
I'm really happy to hear you're going to keep writing... I had lost hope now I know there's more:)
Come on now get a chapter ready!
Syl'
person nathalie
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!
person Elizabeth Annette
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please finish!!!!!!
person Elizabeth Annette
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please finish!!!!!!
person kt
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is the weirdest thing i've ever read. i practically spit my coffee out of my mouth when harry was pronounced pregger thi think, though, it'd be cool if it was explained how it's possible for a male to be pregnant...

so bizarre.
person Carrie
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More More More this is good! Update
person xikum
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've just discovered this---It is very interesting! A very novel way to start the fic. Please do continue, this is moving along nicely. What does Snape think of all this? Has he had experience, or was he just trying to be careful? He sure seemed to know what he was doing, but I mean, Ouch---no lube? Yet, somehow, maybe the witch's blessing? Harry managed to be OK. And now, pg! Harry's always wanted a family of his own, and now, he won't have to go back to the Dursleys, at least. Aftr all, even if the babies are his children, they are also Lily's grandchildren, thus blood kin that the protection wards can work through! So, in a way, he and the children protect each other---Did I guess right? Hope so! And hope Snape does come round. He was at least kind with Harry, I'm sure he can be more? Though, I can't imagine him fainting--heh!
person PirateDucky (too lazy to sign in)
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::giggles:: Poor Snapey Snape. He just got enough shocks in one day to last him two lifetimes. I LOVE IT! Anyway, keep writing! I love the story so far.
~Ducky~
person Sylvanus
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the idea!!
Update soon, please;)