rate_review Reviews

Please write more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is so great!!!!!

I love this. It serves Sevvikins right :D Anyway brilliant story. Can\'t wait to read more
love lots
Alaina

I really like this story, but the second half of this last chapter seems..I don\'t know, like it cam from a completely different story! Yes, I can see the Snape proposing bit, but Harry just agreeing, and then acting like he is slightly insane...he doesn\'t really like Snape, and ehm, blaming the hormones when he is only a week along seems a little far fetched. So please, the story was running along so beautifully, and then poof!! You can do better, and I promise that if you changed that last half of the chapter, the story would stay true to the spirit it has shown so far! I love your Ron though, he is just so....Ronish!!!
k

good chapters

I wanna know bout the mad passinate sex. sounds good .

Your smut is good, don\'t be afraid to write it.

I love the playful nature Harry has with Severus, *snorts* consumating the marriage *snort*. Now that Harry has a \'taste\' for it, he may fall into the habit of having it more often. This could only improve your smut skills even more.

You have the passion for writing in you, let it loose and see where it takes you.

Please continue this fic, it\'s funny, dramatic and has Harry and Severus in it, my fave pairing.

Lots of chocolate frogs, sugar quills and confections for your muse.

hahahaha Harry has gone mad
lol
i hope Snape is possessive
i love people being possessive to Harry

Chapter 6 was just way too random for my taste. I know that if I want canon I should go read the books...but that chapter did not fit with the previous five. You are a much better writer than that! I am not keen on heavy angst- so that was not the problem...it just seems like you felt you were under an obligation to post something, yes?
Anyway I still like the story and hopefully you will forgive me for being mean to you.

Grrr.....that was sooooo short, cute but short.......please update soon!!!!!! I'm going insane wanting to know what's gonna happen!

Well, that was a very quick chapter. I hope that things slow down for you soon! I liked the tension you created betwenn Snape & Harry while they were in the closet. All that arguing rather indicative of their relationship. I wonder how the rest of the school will react to the news? Please update soon. You're doing a great job! Priss