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for The Good, the Bad and the Death Eater

by Bambi

person Deadly Nightshade
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this, Hurry up and Add more, lol I want to know who if they get 2gether or will they make it etc etc!!!! Luv Nightshade xoxox
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very Impressed with it!!
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So they just can\'t seem to work it oWellWell, I hope they do though.. I would like to see them together, but all in good time of course.

I just notice a misspelling that you do a lot, and I thought you wanted to know: You often write \"then\" in stead of \"than\". It should be for example: \"it is better \'than\' this.\" or \"\'then\' this is better\"

Wow! I can\'t believe you just posted 4 chapters all at once! Great work, loved them! Looking forward to more!

Lol. Leonora.
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! I just read chapter 5, and I enjoyed it very much! So Snape didn\'t have the guts to tell Aphrodite.. I wonder how things are going to evolve.. I\'ll be reading on!

Leonora.

And ps. Thanks again, now that I know for sure that it was you reviewing my story. Another chapter is up today by the way if you\'re interested!
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter! I can\'t wait to see what Severus is going to tell her (I thI caI can guess though ;o)

Hey, and thanks for your review, it was you right? There is another chapter ready in my story if you\'re interested!

Lol. Leonora.
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like this! I like Snape in your story! I\'m very ecited to see where this is leading! Keep up the good work!

Lol. Leonora.