rate_review Reviews

love the story keep going
u write beautifully
dont everstop

i really like this story line and i hope that u continue with this story in the future. i cant wait to read more

Are you going to update this story? I hope you do. I am curious how you are going to bring Harry and Snape together. I like that Harry has a new pet. And I hope that Harry\'s relative

This story is great I love it when Harry stops being a pawn and takes control of things. I can\'t wait to read more. Ari

Loving this so far! Please write more! ((I love how you didn\'t make Harry just jump into bed with Sev within the first 2 chapters))

rock on!

A very intresting story. Good idea to let him get a similar trunk to the one that Moody had in the fourth book.
I like Harry\'s new style very much by the way ^^. Please can you get him to wear black eyeliner? That would be goddamn hot :P
Anyway, please keep on writing! I wanna know what happens.

Read the whole story today. Really enjoying it. I like a strong decisive Harry. Look forward to Harry/SEverus connection.

This story holds good promise even though Harry is a bit OOC. However that can easily be explained by grief and maturing.
There are also a few... not quite plot holes, but slight inconsistencies and things that I do not find quite belivable. Forinstance, one would belive that Voldemort would have spies all over Diagon Alley, and even if Harry\'s hair is longer he would be recognizeable to anyone who were looking for him. And one would also summarise that Albus would have his own means of keeping track of Harry. He would surely know that Harry had been to Gringott\'s, don\'t you think? Oh well, that\'s all minor stuff, and artistic license allows for a lot of things. The one thing I can not accept however is the use of \"dollars\". Harry lives in Great Britain. They do not use dollars there. Until you fix that there will be no Chocolate Covered Snape for j00. ;)

This is a cool story. I do have one question though why did Harry have to get all those piercing and the tatoo. In most of the fics I have read where Harry \"changes\" he ends up in leather, piercing and tatoos. Why couldn\'t he just start to dress better in clothes that fit and acting more adult like or something like that why does he turn all \"goth or whatever\" .... just wondering to myself more about those things I guess. I really do like the story and I love the trunk that is so cool now hw can pretty much bring everything but the kitchen sink with him when he goes to school. I am glad he has decided to learn things for himself about magic and not depend on what others tell him to learn, etc. Harry really needed to take things in his own hand so to speak. It was also a nice touch about Harry\'s mom really being a squib and not a \"muggle born\" even though it shouldn\'t really make a difference. So he is the heir for two of th houses that is interesting. I can\'t wait to see Snape\'s reaction to Harry being gone and his relatives not knowing him at all. Update again soon I look forward the next chapter

Hmm, wonder what\'ll happen next? Like it...