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right now i really love u cause i really love ure stories as this is my faveorite fan fic so far i just wannna say u did one hell of a good job and please update as often as u can i almost went crazy when it was lef at chapter 6 for a few months
thnx
oh and happy new year...

Lol... i had ideas of Sev seeing in their lessons Harry reading his book naked at his house, previously mentioned...
Great chapter, I kinda feel sorry for Remus, but i believe this is how i would react too if i was Harry,
Can't wait for more
Chow for now!

good chapter, Merry Cristmas, bye

i love this story, ive just recently started reading snarry fics again (i stopped for a while) and this is perfect for easing me back into them :D so update soon please

This could be a good story, but you need a Beta. Your sentences are very choppy and too many words are mis-spelled or missing. Also, you don't need to describe every little tiny (or big) item that Harry purchases. Many things you go on and on and on...(you get my drift?) about are irrelevant to the story. Another thing, you, as so many authors are doing, go about making Harry's changes so drastic that most readers do not like him! The clothing is a good one, I like that. He really does need to spend money on himself. I can see him going for a tatoo and even an earring, (One!) but no matter how angry or upset he is, personality does NOT change that quickly. (I have a Psych background and raised 6 children..4 of them my own, as well as being a leader in several different youth related groups) I do have to say that I like the story line and will finish reading it.

i like it want to see were it goes

Great update!!! I am looking forward to the next chapter. Happy Holidays to you!!!!!!!!!

good story, I love it, bye

Nice work, ignore HBP in regards to anything for your fan fiction. It allows little wiggle room.

oh please hurry and continue the story! I actually like this one very much. A rarity lately. Encore! (did i spell that right?)